Tuesday, 31 October 2017

Kindness Acrostic Poem

WALT: use new words to suit my acrostic poem

I was able to use many new words in my poem. I was able to use a thesaurus to find more interesting words to use in my acrostic poem. The new words in my acrostic poem are:

  • Precept
  • Sensational
  • Encouraging
  • Balckout
  • Delingtful
  • Treated
  • Noticeable
  • Increse 

Tuesday, 17 October 2017

John Pule Art

This is my John Pule art. This art idea is inspired by the Nuiean artist  John Pule. This year Elm Park School is turning 50 and we needed to draw symbols that relate to our Elm Park School journey.

Wednesday, 20 September 2017

Monday, 18 September 2017


WALT:locate, select and evaluate text for speciļ¬c information including internet sources

I was able to research diabetes from the internet and change the internet words into my words. I found that sometimes the research that the internet gave was a bit hard to understand, but after reading through the paragraph the words started to make sense.

Next time I will read through the paragraph properly and correctly the first time round. Next time I can try to be more consistent and focused on the task I was doing on Diabetes.

Ghost Maths

WALT: Use a calculator with accuracy

I was able to press the correct numbers the second time round when I rewrote the equation. I was able to press the numbers firmly so that the number showed upon the calculator screen. I was able to enter the plus and minus and equal sign when it was needed. I was able to press the equal sign only once so my equation does to double.

Next time I will try to add up the easy numbers like 60 x 4 in my head and not using a calculator. Next time I will try to avoid using the calculator for easy things. Next time when I make a mistake in my calculations I can click CE and then the plus sign to go back to my previous number. Next time I will try  to look at the screen every time I put a number in.

Speech Persuasive Words

WALT: Detrimentally choose words to create an affect on the audience

I was able to write my speech using persuasive words and emotive words in my speech. I wasn't aware that I used persuasive words until I went back and read through my speech.

Next time I will try to use more emotive and persuasive words in my speech. Next time I will try to remember to put some descriptive words in my speech.

Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Ghost's Thoughts

WALT: to create and drawing and show what Ghost was thinking when he was racing.

I was able to take my memory back to the book and think of the sentences Ghost was thinking at the time.