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You have a wonderful blend of writing and illustrations. I enjoyed your story-telling as you had a lot of detail. Next time you can think of adding some interesting language features like alliteration or metaphors. Miss H
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You have a wonderful blend of writing and illustrations. I enjoyed your story-telling as you had a lot of detail.
Next time you can think of adding some interesting language features like alliteration or metaphors.
Miss H
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