WALT: to edit and revise my Camp Merc writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback
Learning Reflection
I was able to make changes to my work. I changed the spacing between my sentences because Everest told me to.Next time I will try to reflect on my work on my own or sit next to somebody who I know will help me and give me good feedback.
3 comments:
I loved reading your poem, top effort with your language choices and ideas. I agree that taking time to listen to feedback is super important.
Keep up your amazing writing.
Nadia, you are so fortunate to have had this Camp experience.
I hope you will treasure all these memories for ever.
Your words made me smile. I could easily see how much you enjoyed your camp.
*For next time* When writing proper nouns (like Rainbow's End) remember to use capital letters at the beginning of the words.
-Anahita
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